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Thursday, September 6, 2012

paralympic


As the person was running he balanced skillfully and he ran like it was end of the world he ran all the way to the finished line. As they ran they saw lots of other people balanced skillfully cause everyone had curved metal legs and he had curved metal legs also. he ran and he started winning and he past the finished line and he was happy I think paralympic is a good thing because people that think they can’t be in the olympics but they can cause they're the paralympic that why I think it’s a good think.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Anthony
    Great story but you just need to check your sentences before you post it. Also check your capital letters too.

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  2. Hi Anthony I like your story but you keep on repeating your self. But that is okay.

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