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Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Saving hump back whale

Whale researcher, Michael Fishbach and his family motored out over the glassy water of the Sea of Cortez in their small runabout. They were out making whale observations, unaware that soon they would help save the life of one of the world’s most magnificent creatures, a humpback whale.

As they approached the whale there were no signs of life . It looked close to death. But suddenly it forcefully exhaled, sending spray flying. It was still alive.

As they went toward it they saw there was a net on the side of it. It was tangled in the net.

They were trying to take the net off. It was afraid of them It was hard because it kept moving around so Michael jumped in the water and try see what was wrong with her when he went toward it he saw what was wrong and there was a net he try get it off but it pushed him away.

Later on they pulled some of the net off and there was one fin free and they try to cut it but it wouldn’t cut.
They just had one small knife then some more net came off and two of the fins were free.

And it took them fora ride for half hour next it came up from under them and they got all the net they can get and cut it and got free and it was showing them thanks for joy it was jumping up in the air showed that it was happy.





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As they approached the whale there were no signs of life . It looked close to death.But suddenly it forcefully exhaled, sending spray flying. It was still alive.

Michael jumped in the water to try see what was wrong with her. It was afraid of them because it was tangled in the net.

When they went to it they were trying to take the net off. It was hard because it kept moving around. He tried to get it off but it pushed him away.

Later on

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