tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8433352272343442126.post5786752504448954740..comments2014-11-07T10:57:51.455+13:00Comments on Anthony: Why is swimming important PES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8433352272343442126.post-81423586004944824162014-06-04T10:16:23.688+12:002014-06-04T10:16:23.688+12:00Thank for the comment hopefully you can come back ...Thank for the comment hopefully you can come back and become a teacher.Anthonyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02539833049551457901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8433352272343442126.post-76385418004460649012014-05-27T07:20:25.413+12:002014-05-27T07:20:25.413+12:00Anthony, you are right swimming is very important....Anthony, you are right swimming is very important. Children do have lots of opportunities to learn to swim, most schools have a swimming program that students can participate in.<br /><br />Your writing has some good ideas. This is a good independent attempt at explanation writing. It gives us some ideas for how we can improve your writing. How would you improve this piece of writing?Andyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16487644460275402051noreply@blogger.com